You have made a good start here you have covered everything needed to pass and you have written nice and clearly. To get the higher grades you need to: Change the few sections where your information is copied, e.g., legal requirements Add more detail and examples throughout – go through the post and check to see that you have always explained/defined the term in as much detail as possible (have you for sources of funding for example..?) and then add specific examples for each one, e.g., we talked about Megan Ellison in class. You need specific examples for each section to get the higher grades.
You have made a good start here you have covered everything needed to pass and you have written nice and clearly. To get the higher grades you need to:
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Add more detail and examples throughout – go through the post and check to see that you have always explained/defined the term in as much detail as possible (have you for sources of funding for example..?) and then add specific examples for each one, e.g., we talked about Megan Ellison in class. You need specific examples for each section to get the higher grades.
You have not uploaded the newer version - please do so ASAP.
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