Wednesday, 23 December 2015

Screenplay Treatment

Beginning

Its an early sunny morning in Norfolk and two teenagers that are set to go out for the day. One boy and girl. The boy goes to pick up his girlfriend as they decided to go for an early morning walk on the day which is their 2 year anniversary (mid shot of them holding hands and walking). They start to talk about when they first met and the first date they went on. Shots of them on the first date that they went on as they are talking. They decided to take a seat on a bench and discuss what they were going to do later on to celebrate the anniversary. The boy then receives a text off of another girl saying "whats your plans for later on?" as he looks at his phone so does his girlfriend and they start to have an argument if anything is going on between them.

Middle

Whilst the argument is going on, in the background a figure is walking towards them and it turns out to be a man in his 40's. He goes up to the couple and asks the boy to give him a hand with his car just down the road. He leaves his girlfriend and says "ill be 5 minutes". He walks off with the old bloke and he is explaining whats wrong with the car. As they get closer towards the car 2 big blokes in leather jackets and jeans walk past and wink at the teenage boy. As they look at the car the 40 year old then gets in the car and starts it up, he asks the teenage boy to open the boot for him. As he opens the boot he discovers a girl tied up in the boot and rolls her over only to then find out it was the girl that messaged him. The bloke then tells him to take the girl, so he then unties her and pulls her unconscious body out of the car. The bloke then winds down the window and says "wouldn't it be a shame if your girlfriend was to see this". As he looks over to bench where he was sitting with her there was no figure sitting there. The bloke then pulls away with out saying anything else and leaves the two teenagers alone.

End

As he is carrying the unconscious girls body over to where he was sitting, his phone starts to ring and its his girlfriends number ringing him. He decides to ignore the call and try to wake up out the unconscious girl. It starts to ring again and again he decides to ignore it again. He wakes up the unconscious girl and she seems startled to see him, she gives him a smile and says "now you have me". He looks confused at her and repeats to her what she just said. "Yeah now she has gone you have got me" she says. Out of her pocket she pulls out a medicine needle and stabs him in the back of his neck. He then falls to the floor unconscious as she is starring down on him.

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